Romance Fiction posted February 28, 2017


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Just a question

by Mustang Patty

Why are you standing in front of my locker?
 
I just wanted to say hi.  Hi!
 
Hello.  Was there something else?
 
I was wondering about something.
 
About what?
 
Well, I was wondering if you'd go out with me?
 
Me?  You want to go out with me?
 
Yes.  Why is that so surprising?
 
It's just that you're you, and I'm me.  You’re the captain of the football team, Mr. Cool, and all that.  I'm just the girl that gets all the answers right.
 
But you're the prettiest girl in school.
 
Oh. Okay, I'll go out with you.  When?
 
As soon as you want.

 



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