Letters and Diary Poetry posted January 27, 2015 | Chapters: | ...196 197 -198- 199... |
A Paradelle
A chapter in the book Little Poems
Moving Steps
by Treischel
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This picture is of one of the escalators at the Mall of America in Bloomington, Minnesota, a suburb of Minneapolis. The Mall has 4 levels, but this shot was taken from the 3rd floor. You literally can shop there all day. The many escalators and elevators allow you to travel up and down with ease.
This poem is a Paradelle. This format takes a bit of warming up to. At first I didn't like it, because I thought all that repetition was rediculous. I a way, it is. But, once you get over that, you see how the building blocks are slowly assembled to finally resonate in the concluding crescendo. So you finally get it. I'm sure it takes at least a second reading.
A Paradelle is a French repeating form of poetry. It is considered difficult to write. It is comprised of 4 stanzas of six lines each (Sestets). The format is as follows:
In Stanza 1, 2 and 3 - line 1 and 2 are identical, as are line 3 and 4 identical, but lines 5 and 6 are a saying made up of the words in lines 1 through 4.
Stanza 4 - Uses all the words in lines 5 and 6 from stanza 1,2,3 to make a full saying to sum up the poem in the last 6 lines.
This photograph was taken by the author on February 25, 2014 at the Mall.
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and 2 member cents. This poem is a Paradelle. This format takes a bit of warming up to. At first I didn't like it, because I thought all that repetition was rediculous. I a way, it is. But, once you get over that, you see how the building blocks are slowly assembled to finally resonate in the concluding crescendo. So you finally get it. I'm sure it takes at least a second reading.
A Paradelle is a French repeating form of poetry. It is considered difficult to write. It is comprised of 4 stanzas of six lines each (Sestets). The format is as follows:
In Stanza 1, 2 and 3 - line 1 and 2 are identical, as are line 3 and 4 identical, but lines 5 and 6 are a saying made up of the words in lines 1 through 4.
Stanza 4 - Uses all the words in lines 5 and 6 from stanza 1,2,3 to make a full saying to sum up the poem in the last 6 lines.
This photograph was taken by the author on February 25, 2014 at the Mall.
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