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A Senryu
A chapter in the book Little Poems

senryu (rest in peace)

by Treischel

senryu (rest in peace)




this rest in peace stuff
when all things are considered
is just for the birds







I was driving through a small cemetery in Mendota, Minnesota when I spotted this flock of Turkeys. They seemed to project this statement.

The poem is a Senryu.
A Senryu is a Japanese form of poetry. A Senryu is identical to the structure of a Haiku. It has three lines. The first line has 5 syllables. The second line has 7 syllables. The third line has 5 syllables again.
It is primarily concerned with human nature. It is often humorous or satiric. A non-traditional senryu can have less than 5/7/5 syllables. A common variation is 3/5/3
Japanese poetry contains a number of esoteric rules. These include:
The unusual title format.
Lack of capitalization and punctuation.
There should be no rhyme and little alliteration.
The use of a word ending in "ing" is frowned upon.
There is a requirement to have a "cutting" or "turn" in the poem whereby the thought the reader anticipates takes an unexpected or surprising "turn".

This photograph was taken by the author himself.
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