Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted January 17, 2013 | Chapters: | ...10 11 -12- 13... |
The Formation Recipe (Shape Poem)
A chapter in the book Commentary and Philosophy
Creation
by Treischel
Our Earth.
It took a single speck To spark the rich sandy substance, some water from heaven's cosmic cloud deck. Throw in large measures of frozen primal blackest matter with just one pinch of dust that swirls upon the universal platter, then absorb each creative breath of God from within a billowing blue. Add cauldrons of molten metal from the fiery furnace of the celestial stew. Then comes violent birth of a new universe as the transient elements explode: asteroids, red planets, constellations, and stars, as black holes start to implode, spinning free ovals and orbits and magnetic belts, pulled by force of gravity, form solar systems as a collection of moons and sun's planets with rings. Among billions created is our own, with a blue watery personality. having fortunate and sacred mix to support many living things First the waters covered all in deep blue blanket of froth. Then ancient waters gathered to expose a land, letting creatures walk solid sand. These took over Earth. Then Man. |
Free verse and rhyme
I tried to make this as close to a round sphere as possible. There is no intent is hold a meter. There is some rhyme, but that was not my focus.
Thanks for the artwork Earth by amfunny.
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and 2 member cents. I tried to make this as close to a round sphere as possible. There is no intent is hold a meter. There is some rhyme, but that was not my focus.
Thanks for the artwork Earth by amfunny.
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