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Two mates out on the prowl
What are friends for?
by fionageorge
“Did you see that dress? The red one on that blonde?”
“I sure did. It wasn’t a dress, it was more like a handkerchief.”
“Yeah, that’s what I meant. There’s not much of it.”
“She looks alright from this angle. Probably out for a good time. Wanna give it a go?”
“What d’you mean?”
“I’ll walk over and buy her a drink. Then you saunter over and join us. I’ll introduce you, and hey, we’ll probably be in like Flynn. No-one wears an itty bitty dress like that unless they’re looking for action.”
“Okay, you give me the signal.”
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“What happened, she give you the brush-off? I’ve been sitting here for ages. You seemed to be having a serious conversation. You’re not trying to cut me out, are you?”
“Come on, I have to get out of here.”
“Whoa! What happened? Mate, you look like you’ve seen a ghost. What’s up?”
“I’ll tell you outside. Are you coming or not?”
“No, I’m having a good time. If she brushed you off, she may be more attracted to me. I’ll give it a go. Your turn to wait.”
“Don’t do it, you won’t like her. Let’s go to another pub.”
“Nope, I saw her first, I’ll give it a shot.”
"Okay, Mate, go for it. Good luck!"
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“Why didn’t you tell me? My God, now what will I do?”
“You wouldn’t listen.”
“You should’ve told me. I feel like an idiot! What kind of friend are you?”
“The best kind. Loosen up, Jack. One day you’ll look back and laugh at this.”
“I’ll never think it was funny.”
“I’m sure your mum will think it was funny. She’ll consider it a great compliment, actually. Here she is in her new blond wig and sexy dress, and her son tries to crack on to her!”
Write Me Some Dialogue writing prompt entry
“Did you see that dress? The red one on that blonde?”
“I sure did. It wasn’t a dress, it was more like a handkerchief.”
“Yeah, that’s what I meant. There’s not much of it.”
“She looks alright from this angle. Probably out for a good time. Wanna give it a go?”
“What d’you mean?”
“I’ll walk over and buy her a drink. Then you saunter over and join us. I’ll introduce you, and hey, we’ll probably be in like Flynn. No-one wears an itty bitty dress like that unless they’re looking for action.”
“Okay, you give me the signal.”
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“What happened, she give you the brush-off? I’ve been sitting here for ages. You seemed to be having a serious conversation. You’re not trying to cut me out, are you?”
“Come on, I have to get out of here.”
“Whoa! What happened? Mate, you look like you’ve seen a ghost. What’s up?”
“I’ll tell you outside. Are you coming or not?”
“No, I’m having a good time. If she brushed you off, she may be more attracted to me. I’ll give it a go. Your turn to wait.”
“Don’t do it, you won’t like her. Let’s go to another pub.”
“Nope, I saw her first, I’ll give it a shot.”
"Okay, Mate, go for it. Good luck!"
~~~~
“Why didn’t you tell me? My God, now what will I do?”
“You wouldn’t listen.”
“You should’ve told me. I feel like an idiot! What kind of friend are you?”
“The best kind. Loosen up, Jack. One day you’ll look back and laugh at this.”
“I’ll never think it was funny.”
“I’m sure your mum will think it was funny. She’ll consider it a great compliment, actually. Here she is in her new blond wig and sexy dress, and her son tries to crack on to her!”
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Writing Prompt This writing prompt requires you to write your most creative and believable two person dialogue(conversation)from one of the six topics listed in the announcement. |
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This writing prompt requires you to write your most creative and believable two person dialogue(conversation)from one of the six topics listed in the announcement.
Write a submission based on the above prompt.
1) Can you help me find my dog?
2) Dude, you should get tested for that.
3)Did you see that dress?
4)I'm sorry to have to tell you this...
5)Hello, Operator?
6)I'll take that______ over there.
305 words.
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and 2 member cents. This writing prompt requires you to write your most creative and believable two person dialogue(conversation)from one of the six topics listed in the announcement.
Write a submission based on the above prompt.
1) Can you help me find my dog?
2) Dude, you should get tested for that.
3)Did you see that dress?
4)I'm sorry to have to tell you this...
5)Hello, Operator?
6)I'll take that______ over there.
305 words.
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