| General Poetry posted January 29, 2009 | Chapters: |
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a house; not quite a home
A chapter in the book CSP: A Collection of Poems
Something is Missing...
by Sixteezkid
New curtains hung today draping each side with a view of snow-laden spruces Oriental rug dresses foyer Complements colors to each chair and vase Fabrics and furniture fill once-empty spaces. A few niches remain void Surveying each detail a sadness prevails- I am alone admiring aesthetics. A house, not a home |
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I don't know the difference between prose and free verse. So any comments are very much welcomed. I haven't written this way before.
UPDATE: Well, it's been honed and honed with the help of a dear poet friend. Still trying to get there. Thanks Jazh!!
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and 2 member cents. UPDATE: Well, it's been honed and honed with the help of a dear poet friend. Still trying to get there. Thanks Jazh!!
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