General Poetry posted January 16, 2009 Chapters:  ...91 92 -93- 94... 


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A gambling fever...

A chapter in the book CSP: A Collection of Poems

Blackjack Blues

by Sixteezkid



Driving to Las Vegas, I am
Thrilled about this trek
I love to feel that green felt table
And a newly shuffled deck

Pealing rings of slot machines, I
Walk right by them all
Twenty-One has better odds
A hit or stay - it's mine to call

Changing wads of money, for those
Chips like precious stones
I allow myself to pounce
Into that chair; I sit my bones

Looking for my fortune, I just
Know it's in that stack
As the dealer flings those cards out
How I hope for that blackjack

Playing now for hours, with no
Chance for me to win
That pot of gold; I'm finished
Once again, long in the chin.





The Words Are The Same contest entry

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9 out of these 10 words required to be used:

Allow - Steal - Finished - Peal - Stone - Fling - Fortune - Shuffle - Pounce - Feel

You can leave out one word. So write a poem that uses at least nine of the ten words above. A word can be plural (so "steal" or "steals"). But not changed. So "steal" can be "steal" but not "stolen".

I used all except the word, "steal".



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