General Poetry posted November 30, 2008 Chapters:  ...139 140 -141- 142... 


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An acrostic to the vicious circle
A chapter in the book CSP: A Collection of Poems

Depression

by Sixteezkid


Deep and dark moments
Erratic, these meanings
Pose threat to a new light
Raise doubt within my sight
Eye truths, seeking day.
Spilt guilt getting through
Senses numbed... crafty lies
In webs spun by my hands
Ought not feed their demands
Nor yield to dismay.




Acrostic Poetry contest entry

Recognized


5-6-6-6-5 in first five lines and same repeats in second 5 lines. Did not break up those up because of the nature of the acrostic to stay as one.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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