General Poetry posted November 20, 2008 Chapters:  ...145 146 -147- 148... 


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Divorce: From impact to healing
A chapter in the book CSP: A Collection of Poems

Nuclear Family and the Divorce

by Sixteezkid

Ground Zero - shock, carnage, silence
Dreams lying flat, their branches brittle
Broken in scorched scapes

Ground Zero plus five - no dream alive
Hopes spiraled from their once sure destiny
Buried in a gray arena

Ground Zero plus ten - resurrection
Self-titled Survivors growing sprigs
Breathing the dirty air

The Outpost - dare they claim victory
Is the horizon safe to glance at
with all its brightness and color

And Beyond - Its name is Future
Not looking back,
We call it Fragile





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In above-ground nuclear testing, measurements of devastation are taken at many points: Ground zero is point of impact, GZ plus 5 miles, GZ plus 10 miles, the "outpost", etc. My poem is melding the language of a nuclear blast with the initial trauma of family members in divorce and later in time, how they are healing. (The distance of miles in the blast is the distance of time after the divorce).
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