Satire Fiction posted August 15, 2008


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Conflict turns to trust

Giving in - to Giving.

by zeezeewriter

“You don’t need to bother telling her, I’ve decided to have an abortion,” Grace said.

“Don’t I have a say in this? I am the father, you know.”

“Edward, you’re a married man, or have you forgotten?”

“I want this child, Grace.”

“But you don’t want me, Edward.”

“You have no idea how much I want you, Grace. I told my wife about us. We’re getting a divorce.”

“I’m still having an abortion.”

“And, I’m still going to marry you. I love you.”

Grace turned and looked out the window.

“You get the four AM feeding.”

“Deal,” he said.




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