General Poetry posted March 23, 2025


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A poem on Elon Musk

I 'Did Nazi That Coming' Twice!

by Videl Sky

Part two to my comedic lament on Musk,
Now even his shareholders know he’s not one to trust!
$200 billion flushed right down the drain -
Throw him on his ‘Hyperloop’, rev the hate train!
 
Elon created DOGE, it’s weird he diverts the credit.
Maybe ‘cause his cronies rise by legacy and not merit.
‘Big Balls’ who has his hands balls deep in our finances,
Was fired for blabbing his other firms’ advances.
 
“I am become meme” what a savage edgelord -
His brain’s so rotted that he abhors a chessboard.
He said he’d stop world hunger, but put it on a shelf,
People still believe him though he’s tattled on himself.
 
Oh! Germany should “move beyond,” forget the Nazi guilt,
So that when it’s all forgotten, hate can be rebuilt.
I once admired him, which really makes it worse,
He snatched a share of my soul; Tesla's were its hearse.



Musk writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem about the most popular man in America ..Elon Musk. Love him or hate him. Let your feeling be known.


A little backstory for things Elon has said/promised that I included in this poem:
His Hyperloop concept had people excited, but he ditched it and many speculate it was a ploy to undermine California's high-speed rail project.
There is controversy on who is really running DOGE, as Trump said Elon was in charge but others say he isn't.
Edward Coristine, aka 'Big Balls', worked at one of Elons Companies, which is why I included the legacy line, as he wouldn't otherwise be qualified for the position he was placed in.
He said chess is 'too simple' and basically said that it was boring because it didn't use technology.
He claimed that if the World Food Program could come up with a way to end world hunger for $6 billion he would do it, but when they gave him the plan he gave the money to his own company.
He went on a video appearance for a far-right German party and said that "There is too much focus on past guilt, and we need to move beyond that," hours before the anniversary of the liberation of Auschwitz.
And, as somebody who has been to Auschwitz, I don't believe it should ever be moved past or forgotten.
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