General Poetry posted March 14, 2025

Peter Jarvis

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Cleaning battles, where grime always wins

The Spouse Rules the House

by Peter Jarvis

I hate cleaning the house,
It’s worse than the nagging old spouse
Granted, I love to see everything clean
The constant battle is frankly obscene—
Filthy grime always wins the last rouse!

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Poem With These Words writing prompt entry

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The challenge is to write a poem that includes the words provided. Your poem can be of any type.

The words:

love - hate - clean - filthy

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Cleaning battles, where grime always wins

The Spouse Rules the House

by Peter Jarvis

I hate cleaning the house, It’s worse than the nagging old spouse Granted, I love to see everything clean The constant battle is frankly obscene— Filthy grime always wins the last rouse!

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I hate cleaning the house,
It’s worse than the nagging old spouse
Granted, I love to see everything clean
The constant battle is frankly obscene—
Filthy grime always wins the last rouse!