General Poetry posted March 8, 2025


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His lack of love killed me, and I yearned to rise with him

Raise Me Up

by Keely Fiedorowicz

Maim me
End me
Then raise me up again
To live beside you



15 Syllable Poem contest entry


This is an old poem I wrote in 2017, with a few adjustments and small edits to get it down from 21 syllables to 15 syllables.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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