Mystery and Crime Flash Fiction posted February 1, 2025


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Who Outsmarted Who

Wise Guy

by Begin Again


His boss’s words echoed in his head. “Don’t screw this up.”

“I've got this!” Mack chuckled and slammed the door shut. “You’ll never escape, Jackson!”

A muffled yell came from inside.

A hiss filled the air. Gas seeped through the vents into the locked room.

Mack chuckled. “Sweet dreams, Detective.”

Click.

The lights flicked on. Cold steel pressed against Mack’s head.

“Yeah — sweet dreams,” a voice drawled.

Mack froze, recognizing her voice. He whipped around.

Detective Jackson’s gun fired.  

Blood oozed. Mack  gasped, “Who’s in —”

Jackson shrugged. “Another wise guy I was chasing before you rudely interrupted me.”




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