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Inverted Katauta
A chapter in the book 2024 Gypsy's Haiku

Surrendering to the Sea

by Gypsy Blue Rose


The poem and presentation by Gypsy Blue Rose (c) copyright 12/9/24

 

surrendering to the sea

    he floats on sensuous waves—

his soul overflows

 

 

 




INVERTED KATAUTA is an unrhymed 8th-century Japanese poem consisting of 19 syllables with a 5/7/7 pattern, inverted is 7/7/5 syllables pattern. A pair of katauta is called a sedoka. The form was used for poems addressed to a lover like tanka. click here for more info

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