General Poetry posted December 3, 2024


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He broke many women... Will he be stopped?

A Story of a Prince

by Keely Fiedorowicz

He rode into her life
Like a Prince Charming
In his Camaro,
Shining white like a fairy tale knight's horse
His handsomeness alarming
He whisked her away
Took her breath away day to day
 
She rode away with him 
Filled with wonder to the brim
Like a fair damsel on a white horse with a fairytale prince
She felt like royalty with him
He was her prince and her heart wasn't hard to convince
She danced with him every step of the way,
She kissed her first with him
And she he had swayed
And she loved him with all her heart
From him she never wanted to be apart
 
He loved her a bit, yes it's true
But he loved himself more, that he knew
His blonde hair was waving in the wind
Like an untold goodbye
As he rode away from her forever
Mercilessly he chose to sever
No looking back,
He was looking at the sky
He was a Narcissist
And a joke
And the beast of heartbreak woke
 
She slept with him in full intimacy
She gave it all to him willingly
She adored him
Even now it didn't dim
But she gave herself too soon
He left late that afternoon
He was gone for good,
That she knew
 
Unfeeling, he rode away
Like it was all child's play 
Smiling and laughing to himself,
As heartlessly as an evil storybook elf
Leaving her all alone
With his heart of stone
Alone except for a baby under her summer frock's belt
The frock she wore just for him
Her heart was a bloody welt
A princess no more
There was no way back to that door
She cried for days
From his callous ways
She was left feeling sore
Without her prince
Her life hadn't been the same since
 
The prince rode to the next town over
To trample on another woman's lucky clover
A rich neighborhood 
Where he became prince to another,
His facade almost impossible to smother
She rode with him
In his sparkling car
Like a fair damsel on a white horse with a fairy tale prince
Her life hadn't been the same since
She laughed with him,
She smiled with him,
And she loved him.
 
He made her feel like royalty 
She gave herself to him
In every way
Not knowing he would be gone
The very next day
 
He rode away one night
Oh, it was far from right 
He nursed not even a smidge of pain
Leaving her all alone in clueless oblivion
Little did she know of the coming rain
He smiled to himself
Thinking he was just so great
Feeling he could trick any girl
That he was a prince,
That there was no debate
 
He rode into the night
Then got hit by a truck head on
Almost as big as his ego
 
It was a nasty feat,
A karmic treat
 
As he laid on a cot in the hospital 
He thought that this was just impossible 
He felt real rotten
Daresay worse than the women he had forgotten
His look of royalty slipped away like the moon behind clouds
His chance of living was slim
Already his vision was starting to dim
 
He couldn't believe it but we all could
All because he couldn't control his own wood
Women can be strong
And he did it all wrong
On his deathbed he finally started to atone
As he suffered alone 
 
He passed away that night
Within two hours
Still not knowing that women have powers
He never knew
That woman one hundred and eight
Was the one who rammed into his sports car's grates
And that she would live
And tell her story 
For many years to come...



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