General Poetry posted October 23, 2024


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A contest of winners and losers

Competition

by BermyBye50

Free Verse Contest Winner 

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In the arena of ambition,

where dreams collide like comets,

the pulse quickens, hearts race—

a dance of exhilaration and dread.

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On one side, a spark ignites,

the drive to leap, to chase what gleams.

Hands clenched, muscles taut—

a breath held tight in the chest

as the competition begins.

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There is something pure in this pursuit,

the joy of stretching farther

then we did yesterday.

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Fingers grip the edge of the podium,

sweat mingling with the sheen of triumph,

the sweet scent of victory,

the taste of hard work forged in struggle.

With each step, one side falls behind.

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Not all reach the finish, or hold

the gaze of the crowd that cheers

for the winner, the one on top.

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But beneath the surface, shadows linger,

whispers of envy weave through smiles,

as friendships fracture like glass,

shattered by the weight of comparison.

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The fierce fire of rivalry ignites,

a force that propels us higher,

yet leaves scars that ache in silence,

as we measure worth in wins and losses.

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Competition sharpens us,

as we carve paths through the air,

stronger, faster, clearer.

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We chase glory, and yet,

it slips through our fingers,

a fleeting reward demanding

the pursuit of unceasing success.

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But there’s a cost, a weight

that comes with each victory.

In the mirror of competition,

we see ourselves reflected,

not just as champions,

but as fragile souls seeking purpose.

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For in this relentless pursuit,

of winning there lies a truth—

that competition can lift us,

or drag us down.

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Yet, the lines blur

between pride and fear.

The glint in the contestant's eye,

mirroring our own.

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On one side, there’s light,

a flame that drives us

to grow, to become more.

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But on the other side,

there’s a darkness where envy festers,

where the finish line feels

like a wall, we're never meant

to break through.



Writing Prompt
Write a free verse poem on competition. Tell what it means to be competitive and why you love competition or not. Free verse is a form of poetry that does not necessarily follow to any specific meter patterns, rhyme, or any other pattern. Free verse, despite its freedom, often still has some elements of form. Most free verse does observe a convention of lines and structure. No rhyming patterns.

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