Spiritual Poetry posted October 22, 2024


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Never thought at 55 this would happen

In Loss There is Gain

by Jennifer L Newcomb

So many trials so many tribulations in the past few years

Such great losses leaves my eyes stinging full of tears

As they do I ask the question why with everyone

Waiting for an answer that doesn’t seem to come

I lost my home, all that I own and those that I love

Left me feeling as if punished from the one above

Emotions overtake me scared of what is coming I don’t know

As if standing on sinking sand slowly pulling me below

 

Surely there some life lesson I haven’t yet learned

Daily doing my best and this is what I have earned

Surely I am missing the mark, this all seems not right

Surrounded by the darkness stumbling to reach light

Waking up each day waiting for night again to close my eyes

Exhausted of swimming upstream against my life's tides

Begging for strength that I may again stand on steady land

Instead of going under the foundation of this sinking sand

 

Holding on to my faith praying it doesn’t slip away

While still waiting for answers why this is happening everyday

Nothing left I have to be stripped or taken from me

Empty years of labor, all I had is gone no longer there to see

Lost in my thoughts of despair wanting to turn back time

Having all returned to me that once was all mine

In the silence of my thoughts a familiar voice whispers in my heart

Remember that I am that I am and you are my work of art

 

I am the one who gives and I am the one who takes away

My love is what will forever remain at the end of each day

All else will come and go with the sands of time

Except the love I have for you, I am yours and you are mine

So you see there is no loss of worth or value to what you own

My love is all you will carry with you when I take you home.






 



My Faith Poetry contest entry


This is true. At 55 I lost my home of six years then all my belongings were unjustly taken and sold from a storage facility for $30.00 for a past due balance supposedly on a lien fee of $100.00 The storage unit fees were current and no notice was given in regards to sell of unit. Payments I continued to make unaware the storage was gone, storage facility kept everyone. I lived in a tent for six months and I can't even begin to tell you the despair and anguish of going through all of it. This poem was the best I could do.
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