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Haiku. (rules in author notes)

A chapter in the book 2024 Gypsy's Haiku

Cold Night

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
 
 
winter night chills my bones
 
and nature calls —
 
rushing across the tile floor
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 




Nature calls = need to go to the bathroom

HAIKU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment. It resonates on a deeper level, enlightening the reader and making an insightful connection. English Haiku doesn't have to follow the 5/7/5 form, because Japanese syllables are much shorter. The rule of thumb is to write it as succinctly as possible and 17 syllables or less.


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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.

Gypsy

Pictures from my Pinterest account. The complete presentation and poem created by Gypsy Blue Rose COPYRIGHT@2024
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