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A dream of what could be on a lonely night

Stargazers

by Keely Fiedorowicz

On a lonely night

Slumbering away

Before I sleep

I think away

Of how a night like this

Could be spent....

Curled up tight

On a fuzzy blanket

Dizzy from love and the night sky

Content without wine in our picnic basket

Like in the books and movies

Content with our clothes on

Unlike the books and movies

We are unlike a lot of things

Are

Original

You're falling asleep

And as you're about to close your eyes

I take your hand

And point up at the dark night sky

"We've already done enough

Stargazing for the night,"

You protest

So I take a breath and say,

"You see all these stars?"

You nod sleepily

"A long time ago I dreamed on even

More stars than this

Just for you and I."

You sleepily smile

Far far away

In bed I smile sleepily too

Then sleep comes to take us both

I dream of this same instance

Wherein truth we could have nights

Together

And we could even fall asleep together

Under the moon

and Love's spell

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Write a love poem. It can be humorous, romantic or spiritual.

Written October 10, 2017, about a former intense crush that did not feel the same way about me.

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A dream of what could be on a lonely night

Stargazers

by Keely Fiedorowicz

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