Romance Poetry posted August 30, 2024


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She Came, I Saw and Was Conquered

The Conquest

by Tom Horonzy

 
Memories come a dime a dozen,
 but there are a few that etch indelibly. 
One of mine began in January nineteen sixty-two.
 It lingers today as fresh as a newly blossomed daisy.
 
I was fourteen, a freshman in a new school.  
Our family had moved midterm from Jersey to Pa.. 
Anyway, I ended up sitting at a table 
nearest the girl's side of the cafeteria, 
separated by a two-foot thick vertical column. 
The two genders were segregated. 
This was a catholic school.
 
Catty-cornered from me
 was the cutest girl in the whole world. 
Chris was the first girl I ever noticed differently.
 I think because I was the sole boy 
in a clan of six kids. Girls at the time were icky!
 
Her flaxen hair radiated sunbeams
 that poured through the skylight. 
She had a warm smile and an inviting laugh. 
I felt to be in the presence of an angel. 
I said the same to my new friend Jack, 
who just happened to be, unknowingly, her brother. 
That's how I came to know her name. 
 
It took me a week to say "Hi." 
I wouldn't be the same thereafter for three-plus years.
If I had been a dog, 
when she responded alike,
 my tail would have wagged at red-line rpms. 
My palms got sweaty. 
I spilled my drink, then blushed, 
yet didn't care, for at that moment,
 I had died and entered heaven. 
 

I became more enamored, entranced, 
and inappropriately captivated at that second 
which lasted until graduation three years later.
Maybe Thumper felt alike meeting Miss Bunny? 
 
I wish I could tell tales of success, 
but instead confess we never held hands,
 went on a date or shared a kiss.
 I worshipped from afar, 
even while knowing she had a beau
who was older and owned a car. 
 
She never rejected my advances
 nor accepted them. 
I believe she only thought me a friend 
until my senior year
 when on Valentine's Day, 
she coyly lifted the hem of her uniform, 
showing the lowest portion of bloomers 
that were spotted candy-red hearts, 
causing me to enter cardiac arrest.
 
Sixty years later, I confess 
Christine opened my heart, mind, and spirit
 giving clarity 
Lord Tennyson's words:
 "Tis better to have loved and lost 
Than never to have loved at all."

 



Precious Memory contest entry


I graduated at seventeen. Never had a car. Never had a date. I entered the service, before ever being kissed until when laying sick an unfamiliar face visited and left me with a kiss. It wasn't Chris!

The picture is my wife, who I met in college. I was twenty-seven. She had a like effect on me, as did my teen angel, but all the things I missed back then happened eventually.

I originally released this in story form until a reviewer was kind and told me the contest was to be poetic; therefore this finished work is as expected.
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