General Poetry posted August 29, 2024 Chapters:  ...192 193 -194- 195... 


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5 Senses Free verse no punctuation and in lowercase
A chapter in the book 2024 Gypsy's Haiku

Stars Tremble in Blue

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
 
stars tremble in blue
as children and elders
make a wish or two
 
 
summer-night winds
dance and sing
between ancient trees
 
 
jasmin-imbued breeze
slides between the blinds
and blends with grandma's hot cocoa delight
 
 
after my treat
I go to bed and get tucked in
by grandma and mom
 
 
their spirits linger in my heart
 
 
 
 



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I used the 5 senses: touch, sight, taste, smell, and sound

My mother and grandmother died a long ago but I feel their spirits.

In the top picture, the phrase, "Shaken, not stirred" is inspired by the fictional character, Agent 007 James Bond's famous phrase. It's the way he prefers his martini cocktail.

Some phrases are poetic expressions, not to be taken literally, such as "the stars tremble in blue.

Poem and presentation created by me, Gypsy blue rose@copyright2024

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