| General Fiction posted August 19, 2024 |
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Sometimes experience trumps youth.
All Awash
by Barry Penfold
Light turned to night. A whirring sound intruded, followed by a deluge.
My grandson looked up at me. He was clearly gob smacked.
"What just happened, Grandpa?"
"Well, you said you wanted adventure. Here it is."
Bemused, he muttered,
"Seems as though we are trapped." his voice uncertain.
" We are for the moment. It will pass."
"Are you certain?" He moved uneasily in his seat.
" I know things."
As if on cue, the light returned. The deluge ceased.
I smiled.
Car wash done.
My grandson looked up at me. He was clearly gob smacked.
"What just happened, Grandpa?"
"Well, you said you wanted adventure. Here it is."
Bemused, he muttered,
"Seems as though we are trapped." his voice uncertain.
" We are for the moment. It will pass."
"Are you certain?" He moved uneasily in his seat.
" I know things."
As if on cue, the light returned. The deluge ceased.
I smiled.
Car wash done.
80 Word Flash Fiction contest entry
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The actual word count is 82. Sometimes grandpa's talk with knowledge. The contest is over, but the story goes on. Enjoy.
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