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Contemporsry Haiku
A chapter in the book 2024 Gypsy's Haiku

Fleeting Beauty

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
her fleeting beauty

and tenderness

   take my breath away—

butterfly
 




17 syllables in four lines

The most common literary adaptation in English of haiku looks something like this: one to four lines, no strict syllable count but brief, and often with a long/short or short/long asymmetry. These poems too utilize a caesura. Images need not be taken from nature, though they may be and often are. Seasonality is optional, though often featured. Here is an example:

in the woodpile
the broken ax handle

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem.

Gypsy

Pictures from my Pinterest account. Presentation and poem by Gypsy Blue Rose copyright@2024
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