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A chapter in the book 2024 Gypsy's Haiku

Mediterranean Dreams

by Gypsy Blue Rose


random thoughts about the Mediterranean Sea

 

Mediterranean  

with its undulating waves  

moves like mother-hips 

I wake up tasting  

the ocean in my dried mouth  

I wash off the sea  

my boat sails make love  

to the meandering wind  

foam left on my sheets 

and voyeur seagulls 

shamefully watch from afar 

hiding behind clouds 





Please don't ask me where this poem came from, I have no idea. LoL

I grew up in Spain and visited the Mediterranean Sea often.

- Undulating: to move in waves
- Voyeur =someone who obtains sexual gratification from watching individuals from a hiding place.

5/7/5 poems are similar to haiku but they have fewer rules. It must be three lines with a 5/7/5 syllable count. I add connecting lines grammatically rule to improve the flow.

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.

Gypsy

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