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Haiku (rules in my author notes)
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Chasing Away the Sun

by Gypsy Blue Rose


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chasing away the sun,

 impending night has arrived—

uninvited

 

 

 
 




Night and Day follow the laws of nature, there is no need to invite each other.

"Day is over, night has come.
Today is gone, what's done is done.
Embrace your dreams through the night.
Tomorrow comes with a whole new light." - George Orwell

HAIKU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. It resonates on a deeper level, enlightening the reader and making an insightful connection. English Haiku doesn't follow the 5/7/5 form, because Japanese syllables are much shorter. The rule of thumb is to write it as succinctly as possible and 17 syllables or less.

click here to read haiku examples *** click here to read haiku rules *** click here to read why is 5/7/5 OR LESS rule *** click here for season words

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.
Gypsy
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