Romance Poetry posted May 27, 2024 Chapters:  ...120 121 -122- 123... 


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Contemporary Senryu (rules in my author notes)
A chapter in the book 2024 Gypsy's Haiku

~ She Rises ~

by Gypsy Blue Rose

she rises 

with sun-loving coneflowers

and aroused roosters

she dances 

with chilled breeze

visibly excited

she dreams

about touching his suntanned skin

and kiss his alluring  lips

 

 





CONTEMPORARY SENRYU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. Unlike Haiku, senryu is about human nature and doesn't need a season word. It's written in 17 syllables OR LESS and three lines. For Senryu you don't need a season word (Kigo). Classical senryu was humorous and sarcastic. With time, it has developed into a loser form with any theme.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poems.

Gypsy

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