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Senryu (rules in my author notes)

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In My Mother's Arms

by Gypsy Blue Rose


for my mother
 
 
 
embraced in my mother's arms

  I see myself reflected—

in her eyes
 
 
 
 
 
 
 




SENRYU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. Unlike Haiku, senryu is about human nature and doesn't need a season word. It resonates on a deeper level, leaving the reader enlightened and making an insightful connection between the top two lines and the last one, called the SATORI. It's written in 17 syllables OR LESS and three lines.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poems.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis

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