General Fiction posted May 21, 2024


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A story of a hunter and prey

Monster

by Erika Whittle


The author has placed a warning on this post for violence.

Today I need to let off some steam. I've decided to go hunting. I arrive at the forest. After a trek I see a deer grazing defenselessly in the clearing. I line up my rifle and take me shot. BANG! I approach the creature now lying in the grass. It's still breathing.

I look; its eyes, filled with pain and resentment, reflect my image. I took out my knife and ended its misery. I am a monster to my prey; yet the stag is with me to this day. It keeps me company around the fire, its beauty what my walls desire.



Flash 100 writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a flash fiction story. But you can only use 100 words. Exactly. Title does not count in the word count.
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