General Fiction posted May 20, 2024


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appearing nightly at the Bar Royale

Loser

by jim vecchio


Charlie and I were a thing. Once.

We met at the Bar Royale.

I felt music in my heart anytime we touched. Loved.

Before the accident.

How could he ever desire a woman without her feet?

I return to that bar each night, drowning in my misery.

My only friend is Edna, blind since birth.

Every now and then, I see Charlie peering at me, from the corner, with that dreadful stare. The look that pierces my heart like a thousand blades.

Edna holds my hand, granting me strength to get through another moment.

If only I had her eyes.




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Write a flash fiction story. But you can only use 100 words. Exactly. Title does not count in the word count.


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