General Poetry posted May 9, 2024 Chapters:  ...107 108 -109- 110... 


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Senryu Suite (for rules ck my author notes)
A chapter in the book 2024 Gypsy's Haiku

Touching Venus

by Gypsy Blue Rose


Dreaming....

touching Venus

I dreamt of reaching the stars

but I missed

~€~

and I fell on your lap

like a little girl 

bouncing on your knees

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then I danced for you

with my old friend,

the handsome moon





"Though my soul may set in darkness,
it will rise in perfect light;
I have loved the stars too fondly,
to be fearful of the night" -Sarah Williams

SENRYU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. Unlike Haiku, senryu is about human nature and doesn't need a season word. It resonates on a deeper level, leaving the reader enlightened and making an insightful connection between the top two lines and the last one, called the SATORI. It's written in 17 syllables OR LESS and three lines. Classic Senryu tends to be satirical or humorous. In the 17th century, when it was created, men sat outside taverns writing rather racy senryu about women ... such as limericks

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poems.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis

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