General Poetry posted April 13, 2024


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pessimistic attitude born from poor experiences

fools optimism

by emmabs

fools optimistic ideals 

loves judge appeals  

safety forlorn    

pessimisms born 

isolations a blessing  

never pressing  

Is love just pain? 

disguised with gain 

 

illogically we crave this 

desires amiss 

take the warning

avoid mourning

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Hi! this is my first poem I'm submitting. it is based around the idea of someone experiencing the loss of some form of love, and becoming very pessimistic as the result!
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