General Poetry posted March 11, 2024


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A lost ring.

Lost Opportunity

by Raul1

Phil is at the jewelry store
He buys a $4,000 ring
In his way, he will ask his girlfriend
to marry him
 
Phil happily walks on the sidewalk
He juggles playfully with the ring
It suddenly falls into the catch basin
 
It gets lost in the sewers
What will he tell his girlfriend now?
A lost opportunity
He doesn't have a clue what to say

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