Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted March 9, 2024


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A story of how we loose focus of whatâ??s important

A way to live a life

by Sombul Augustine

Way to lead my life 

Once I had an idea

about a way

To lead a life 

I held it tight

In my fist 

But unfortunately 

I opened my fist

To show you 

That I have lines 

On my palm

That mark my destiny

That I have lines 

That say 

I have a heart

I have a soul

They are made of gold

But unfortunately 

When I opened my fist

Just to show you

Just to prove to you

Something unimportant 

I lost the idea 

The idea that showed 

A way to lead a life




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