Romance Poetry posted March 6, 2024 Chapters:  ...24 25 -26- 27... 


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A chapter in the book 2024 Gypsy's Free Verse

My Lover Rips

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
 
My Lover Rips


my beloved rides
the waves of life
some exhilarating
and others not


my darling is lulled
by 
waves without breaks
lying on a warm
surfboard deck
 
 
my honey's waves
break over sandbars
but he never quits
he tries and tries
 
 
 
ballroom dancing
with the sea tides
always aiming to find
the perfect wave crest
 


My Lover Rips




 




Rip - to surf very well

I used a lot of surfing terms, click here if you want to read the surfing glossary-terms
Thank you very much for reading my poem. Having a bit of fun.

Gypsy
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