General Poetry posted February 25, 2024


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Ukiah- Potlatch Club post

Passion

by dragonpoet

six weeks every year some
remember one man's
agony, death, and rebirth.


The above is a not full ukaih because I forgot it was supposed to rhyme.
The following is may rhyming version. Since a lot of you like the unrhymed
version I decided to keep it.

Salvation
From his birth 'til Eastertide
life violent ride
for our salvation he died




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#110
February
2024

Club entry for the "UKIAH" event in "Put Pen To Paper Potlatch Poetry Club".  Locate a writing club.
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