General Poetry posted February 16, 2024

Lisasview

I was born in Southern California. Made the move to Spain 3 years ago. Although I have been writing since I was ten years old, I never posted anything until last year. All my poems were hand written and in a drawer until then. I had no education i - more...

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Being alone

Gone

by Lisasview

Waiting for you ...

I watch as

dusk forms

shadows across our lawn.

Waiting for you ...

I gaze out the window;

stars appear as

darkness approaches.

Waiting for you ...

I see smeared outlines

of red lipstick,

along the edge

of your crystal wine glass.

Waiting for you ...

I smell your

lingering perfume

and, begin to cry.

Waiting for you ...

Night has taken over,

you are gone

and, I am alone.

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Lonely Poem writing prompt entry

Writing Prompt
Write a free verse poem to express the state of loneliness in not more than 15 lines.

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2024

Written from a mans perspective.
The sadness when you are in love but the person you love does not love you....
And, you are alone.
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Being alone

Gone

by Lisasview

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