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A chapter in the book 2024 Gypsy's Haiku

Bee Staggers

by Gypsy Blue Rose


Haiku rules in my Author Notes
 
 

b e e   s t a g g e r s

    out of the peony—

drunk with sun and nectar

 
 
 
 
 




HAIKU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. It resonates on a deeper level, leaving the reader enlightened and making an insightful connection. American haiku doesn't follow the 5/7/5 form, because Japanese syllables are much shorter. The rule of thumb is to write it as succint as possible and 17 syllables or less. HAIKU uses a dash to pause before the SATORI. Avoid capitalization (except proper names) and punctuation.


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