General Poetry posted February 13, 2024


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Temptation

by Lisasview

 
 
Temptation urged me closer,
his hips swaying smoothly
with each undulating beat.
Upon his lips my eyes fixated,
like a string to a red balloon.
My body filled with heat;
I couldn't pull away.
 
He did not see me
through the screaming crowd.
Moving free ~
music loud
lost under his spell.
 
Sweat glistened over his body ...
like dew drops shimmering
on soft, glimmering rose petals;
I could smell sweetness.
 
Our eyes met ~ as tho' we were one,
fell into a trance, yet;
sultry rhythms took over ...
to his song, I began to dance along.
 
Without warning, the music stopped!
Off the stage my lover leapt,
kissed me tenderly, as
"temptation" swept
us away....!
 
 

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Temptation Poetry writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem any style or length that deals with any aspect of the topic, 'Temptation'.
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#101
February
2024


My poem is written in the following...

Freestyle
Composed with intermittent rhymes and without a set meter or count.
This is NOT a narrative or prose form ... must have a poetic voice.
Rhythm, syntax, and word-flow decide where rhyming occurs.
Technically, this form is free verse with intermittent rhymes.
Presentation and line breaks are determined by author
needs for rhythm and the best, most creative flow.

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