Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted December 31, 2023 | Chapters: | ...155 156 -157- |
Rondeau Redouble with envoi)
A chapter in the book Commentary and Philosophy
The Boom
by Treischel
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As noted in the beginning, I believe that the Bible version of creation is truely compatible with the scientific theory of The Big Bang, which describes a small tiny bead so strongly compressed with dense matter that it exploded to form the whole Universe. I keyed off the biblical term the God brooded over the dark vapors, which scientists might defint as Dark Matter.
This poem basically uses the format of a Rondeau Redouble which, uses the four lines of the first stanza in sequence as refrains in the last line of each succeeding stanza, and a phrase from the first refrain is repeated at the end of the final stanza. I then added a 3 line envoi to create the final effect.
The image is a photograph I took of a Fourth of July fireworks
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and 2 member cents. This poem basically uses the format of a Rondeau Redouble which, uses the four lines of the first stanza in sequence as refrains in the last line of each succeeding stanza, and a phrase from the first refrain is repeated at the end of the final stanza. I then added a 3 line envoi to create the final effect.
The image is a photograph I took of a Fourth of July fireworks
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