General Poetry posted November 15, 2023


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A poem about shattering the chains of a relationship

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by crjanak

You pressed down upon me
Crushed my weakened bones
Seized my hand and lead me
Through ancient, rusted homes
 
Built a tower from the sky
Brought it down to me
Crafted me into a jewel
Taught my lungs to breathe
 
Said “Hello, what’s your name?
Your eyes are beautiful”
Poured it all into my glass
Caused it to overflow
 
Tore it from around me
Eased your steel hold
Let my arm drop by my waist
Made the truth unfold
 
Your lips were an illusion
Your hands only a haze
And though my brain objects
My heart relives those days



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