General Fiction posted October 18, 2023


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Based on a myth I once read.

Unseen

by David Louis Bragen

I had heard of it. I could only guess as to the nature of this unseen shape. I guess, is it something in me? Is it some part of myself? Could it be a shape I have seen, and therefore know about?

There were and I believe there still are three mighty, dangerous and enormous demons guarding the unseen shape. They touch it, but can they see it? Is it someone they know? What is it with this, that it must remain unseen?

In the center of some universe, the three demons and the unseen shape, is there water there? Is there light? Being in the middle for them causes others to be more baffled than ever. What is that feeling? Why wouldn’t it change?

I have a feeling I may never know. If I discover the meaning of this, this,

Unseen shape that does not breathe.




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This is loosely based on part of a story I once read somewhere. I took off with it myself. Sheer speculation.
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