The devil = satan, prince of darkness, lucifer
Hell = hades, the eternal abyss
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Poem in Black Font:

Desire has a thing
for bad boys
so she sold her soul
to the Prince of Darkness
~ Satan�?� ~
in exchange
she got exotic thrills,
power, diamonds, gold,
and to be
the most popular girl
at the end of a long life,
her spirit spiraled down
to Hades, The Eternal Abyss,
with Lucifer, the Big Honcho,
~ the Hotshot�?� ~
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Gogyohka is a five-line free-style Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. Any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay but never rhyme. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe. === source = writers digest ===source=wikipedia

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