General Poetry posted September 24, 2023


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About love that is not true.

Desire's Withering Vines

by Lisasview

 

A crystal glass of wine still in my hand,

such smiling, silky, sexy thoughts explode;

within, they move ~ I can no longer stand …

I should, by now, have learned my lover’s code.

 

Yet, with'ring vines now cover life's desires ...

in time, they each grew hard, unmoving, stilled.

My heart, you’ve lit with sweetly burning fires;

why then, is our love's warmth no longer filled?

 

“Too late,” I say, “hard vines conceal my want;

compelled, I’ve longed (at last) to start anew!”

Of you, I always dream; you always taunt,

aware that never your love will be true.

 

No longer can I care for this, I know ...

while moaning passions ~ it is all for show.

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Write A Sonnet writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a sonnet. A sonnet is a poem of 14 lines. It follows a strict rhyme scheme. It is often about love. Instructions and examples.

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September
2023


Sadly not all love is true.
Thinking you have found love and realising that it is not what you hoped for is so painful. One needs to read between the lines, but when falling in love this is not always easy.
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