General Poetry posted August 12, 2023


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And Heaven Awaits

by Debi Pick Marquette


God's eternal home

  that he longs to share with you ~

and Heaven awaits


love is everywhere

many rooms in His mansion ~
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and Heaven awaits 


there will be such joy

 when we see loved ones again  ~

and Heaven awaits





Write a 5-7-5 Haiku Suite writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
In this this haiku suite, the final 5-syllabe line
, (satori) in each haiku must be the same. For example read my haiku suite "Just a Little Rain"
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sudden burst of wind
scatters the cherry blossoms
just a little rain

Geisha's umbrella
catches petals in the breeze
just a little rain

old woman cries as
pink showers evoke the past
just a little rain

Normally a haiku is nature related but feel free to choose your own topic.

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