General Poetry posted August 12, 2023


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a 5-7-5 suite

Must Be

by Bill Schott

 
sad struggling teens who
 
seek their Holy Father's face
 
must be born again
 
 
murderers in jail
 
accepting God's redemption
 
must be born again
 
 
pompous pretenders
 
confidently couched in church
 
must be born again
 



Write a 5-7-5 Haiku Suite writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
In this this haiku suite, the final 5-syllabe line
, (satori) in each haiku must be the same. For example read my haiku suite "Just a Little Rain"
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sudden burst of wind
scatters the cherry blossoms
just a little rain

Geisha's umbrella
catches petals in the breeze
just a little rain

old woman cries as
pink showers evoke the past
just a little rain

Normally a haiku is nature related but feel free to choose your own topic.


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