General Fiction posted August 4, 2023


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He was scared

Justin's Dentist Visit

by pookietoo


Justin had just turned 6 years old. He also just lost a tooth that finally came out. He had just settled in bed and fell asleep. He was really stressed because he had a dentist visit scheduled in three days. This was his first dentist visit. He had two painful teeth, one on each side of his mouth. He had heard good stories about dentists and also a couple of horror stories from his classmates. After he fell asleep, he dreamed he was in a dentist chair, and he was in the air. His dentist was an evil vampire with huge fangs. In his dream he was also a vampire. In his dream his mouth was stuck shut. The dentist had a huge pair of pliers in his hand, and he could not open his mouth. His dentist tried to suck his blood, and he let out a piercing scream. In his dream his chair kept going in circles in the air. The vampire dentist laughed loudly.

Then Justin woke up. He hated school, but he would rather go to school then go to the dentist even though his two teeth were very painful. He said he would try to pull them out himself. He found a pair of pliers and tried to pull his painful teeth out, but they would not come out. His two teeth become even more painful. He sat in a chair and dozed off again. In his dream there was a tooth fairy that looked evil. She told him he wasn't getting any money for his tooth that came out if he refused to go to the dentist.

He decided he had to make himself go to the dentist as soon as she got there, he noticed the dentist was a vampire just like the one in his dream. He decided to dress like a vampire, but he did not wear fangs. His dentist pointed to the dentist chair, and Justin got in it. He was scared. His dentist turned back to his normal self. He told Justin he would put him to sleep before he pulled his painful teeth out, and he would not feel a thing. He gave him a couple of teddy bears to hold. This really calmed him down.

After he was put to sleep, he dreamed he was sitting on the dentist chair, and the teddy bears were talking. Five vampires surrounded his bed. Each one held a dentist drill, a huge pair of scissors, and a huge pair of pliers. The vampire pricked his arm and leg with his scissors and started sucking his blood. Once again, he let out a bloodcurdling scream.

When he woke up, his dentist had pulled out his painful teeth. Justin was so glad his dentist visit was over. Before he went home, he took off his vampire costume. His dentist let him take one of the teddy bears home with him. That night he found $2 in quarters and nickels under his pillow.



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