General Poetry posted June 20, 2023


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Felt betrayed

Lisa Betrayed Me

by Raul1

Lisa, you are a nice girl
but it doesn't count the fact
you have betrayed me
 
Instead of me, you went out
with that jerk
You even married him
and had children with this fool
 
I had to pick up the pieces
because of you
Everyone treated me like crap
I took the low road in life
 
No girl wanted to go
out with me anymore
I don't know why
How could you do this to me?
I'm nice.



Betrayal writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem in any form or style with Betrayal as the central theme.


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