General Poetry posted May 22, 2023


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They are just like siblings - it is hilarious

Sadie & Toodles

by Monica Chaddick

My name is Sadie, and I must say
Finding my furever family made my day

There is one member about which I'm not sure
My dog sister, Toodles, can be such a bore

She will not run, she will not play
But why she won't she will not say

She only wants to sit and sleep
This behavior makes me weep

Dogs are supposed to play and run
Those are things that we find fun

If all we choose is to be sublime
We might as well have been a feline

When I go try to sit with her
Her sluggishness becomes a blur

She becomes possessed and tries to bite
I didn't lay with her to fight

She really makes my mommy mad
Pooping under the table is VERY bad

So is stealing the baby's food
In my opinion Toodles is very rude!



Animal Opinions writing prompt entry
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Write a humorous poem about one animal's opinion of another. Any style, rhyming or free verse welcome.
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