General Poetry posted May 21, 2023


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Free verse poem

Blue Jays to Live By

by CrystieCookie999

Blue jays believe in heaven,
since they've been blessed
with a few of heaven's hues.
Blue jays are the plain, brash opposite
of "a great white heron in the stillness of its pose."
Their call is both severe and sincere,
a jeer that shears off the last edge of silence,
having arrived at the origins of blue,
some unshakeable beauty
that may accompany their noise--
a raspy chime that may digress
into a chortle or chatter,
a whistle, whirr, or whine.

Their reputation? Irascible.
Occasionally, they may peck,
fight, and kill other birds.
They may steal eggs and even nests.
When they squawk or squabble,
their crest rises, just like a cockatoo's.
Their territory accepts only
the boundaries of wind and ambition.

Blue jays are the black-eyed Bob Hope
of the songbird world,
so fearless and unflappable,
with the heart of a hawk
and sometimes even his call!



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The stunning blue jay photograph is by eileen0204 of fanartreview.com
Single quote from poem "Audubon Aviary" by Stanley Plumly, from his book "Still Missing the Jays." Stanley Plumly (May 23, 1939 to April 11, 2019) was an American poet and the director of University of Maryland, College Park's creative writing program. (Wikipedia) This poem was inspired in part by his bird poetry.

Blue jays are considered songbirds, but their vocalization most often considered a song is the "whisper song," a soft, quiet conglomeration of clicks, chucks, whirrs, whines, liquid notes, and elements of other calls; a singing bout may last longer than 2 minutes. Blue Jays frequently mimic hawks, especially Red-shouldered Hawks. Source: www.allaboutbirds.org/guide/Blue_Jay/sounds#

Irascible=easily angered or irritable.

Bob Hope, an American comedian and actor 1903-2003. He could also sing, but he was more likely to sing a closing song called "Thanks for the Memories." He would sing duets with Bing Crosby and others, but he rarely sang solos other than his signature song. In my opinion, his singing would be like talking, or recitative, with one note per syllable.
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Artwork by eileen0204 at FanArtReview.com

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